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3:44amDevin

who needs punctuation lol

3:44amBrandon

no one

3:44amDevin

when u got sumthin real to say it just gets in the way

3:44amBrandon

but who'd publish me?

I've been thinkin up a story line for a book for about 3 weeks

3:45amDevin

ooo really

3:45amBrandon

it's kinda weird though

I mean I've been thinkin of a few story lines for books and short stories and such

3:46amDevin

are they intriguing

3:46amBrandon

I don't know

one's kinda like a star wars meets the real world meets harry potter meets the end of the world

3:48amDevin

haha sounds good

xcept i dnt like star wars but if u did it right it'd work

3:49amBrandon

I mean it's not with the whole Alliens thing

it's more so set out after the "world" ends

and it's a whole new breed of people

well actually it's 5 different kinds of "humans"

3:51amDevin

nice

3:52amBrandon

these water type humans that have webbed hands and webbed feet and are able to breathe under water

then theres these plant like ones but they look normal they just are really close to the plant life and whatnot

then there are the choas people they only know violence and war and shit like that

they think they are serpior to all others

then it's regular humans

and then the angels/demons

they are like angels but they also have two dif sides and they are often at odds with each other

like the "good" angels (which are actually evil as hell) hate the "bad" demons which don't bother anyone or thing they just are really ugly

3:55amDevin

that sounds sexy

3:55amBrandon

really?

3:56amDevin

yeah like i actually would read that

3:57amBrandon

the main charc. is a water type person

who was forced from his family by the crazy Chaos fucks and now is a "fugitive" of sorts

he meets up with this group of regular folks(which there isn't much of btw and they also believe they are the only people to exist after the world ended)

so they are intrigued by him and his fish like actions and shit...

4:00amBrandon

so he (Sury workin name) tells them about the war and shit going on between the Chaos folks and everyone else...

and after that I havn't gotten far.

4:01amDevin

i actually like it tho

4:01amBrandon

I mean i can go from there right now.

if you'd like me to continue?

4:02amDevin

yupyupyup

4:02amBrandon

ok soooo...

after he tells them about the war thats going on the reg humans (which I shall call hums)

the hums go even deeper into hiding

now at this time the angels who was the cause of the worlds ending

4:05amBrandon

they thought "god" had begun to have to much power and a group of them started creating there own "people" (the chaos folks) to kill god

4:07amBrandon

the demons (which were angels at first disagree'd and the angels decided to beat them and destroy their beauty)

gah this is hard..

help me out!

where do you see it goin form there?

4:08amDevin

hahaha

well personally i think that's great, number 1

and number 2, if u actually started writing it with like dialogue and shit

it'd probably keep going on its own

4:08amBrandon

yea...

I think i should

4:08amDevin

but the plant people haven't came in yet!

4:08amBrandon

yea I know

I kinda forgot why they were there

I may just scract them out...

4:09amDevin

to show the calmness and docility that could be life?

4:10amBrandon

yea

they will be the peace keepers

anywho...

4:12amBrandon

after the angels created the Chaos people they went to "war with god. and as god's last action he destroyed the world as we know wiht

but at the time he was so weak he couldn't completely destroy it as he wanted to

leaving behind some hums some angels and some "demons"

4:14amBrandon

the plant people and the water people were an attempt by the Demons to replenish the earth and shit

they figured if they can make water and plantpeople that would help with the growth of the planet

anywho

the Chaos General named Devin (hehe) decided it was time to destroy the earth people

4:16amDevin

lmao

4:16amBrandon

as they had did with most of the water people and shit...

4:18amBrandon

so they move in on the Earth people and they all band together to make this whole forest of illusion type thing that throw the Devin and the Choas folks off before they enter the Earth land kindom type thinger

4:19amDevin

lol y u tryna kill me n thangs

4:19amBrandon

I ain't

this is one story that won't kill the main evil guy type thinger

anywho

back to Sury he's still in hiding with the hums and shit...

they eventually find there way to an ocean and find some of the last water people so they all band together and shit...

and keep it moving they keep hiding and dodging the Choas people and whatnot until they come to the plant kingdom

of course the earth people believe that they are Chaos people and begin to attack them

with these crazy ass plant growths and and poison vines

4:24amBrandon

with no actually way to defend themselves they start crying their cries (the cries of the water people are so melodic they put the earth people to sleep)

now they start to tie the earth people up and shit like that becasue they both think they are the Chaos folks

4:25amDevin

lol ur brain is the shit i want it

4:25amBrandon

yea this is so off the top of it...

anyway

they eventually wake up and start to talk to the water people and the hums and they convince them its all a big misunderstanding and they are let go

so this union of the hums the water people and the earth people go on for a while

4:27amBrandon

on the other side of the earth Devin and the Chaos people are getting ready to finish the union off once and for all...

so they invade the earthly union

4:29amBrandon

but the earth people and the Water people had begun to make and create these hybrid type fuckers who are totally badass and can control ever aspact of earth and matter...

wait scratch that...

they created these hybrid type fuckers

4:31amBrandon

who can control both earth and water

so they are at war with the Chaos and they are losing badly

4:33amDevin

dude

keep thinkin n tell me 2mro b4 i pass out on my comp and die

4:33amBrandon

the Demons are in a limbo as they don't have as much power as the "angels" do

4:33amDevin

i <3 you and u should so C&P all tht so u dnt 4get